Dreamcloud sighed while Dovewing put the herbs on her shoulder... Wolfclan just had war with Windclan and everyone was very tired. She knew this would be her last battle for a while. Dovewing just told her she was pregnant. Excitement washed through her as she thought of what her mate's reaction would be about having kits. She could see Stoneblaze's face and purr rose through her throat... just thinking about her kits, they’re squealing and their scent made her so happy. "Thank you Dovewing." I said "Get some rest, you need it." "Ok." I padded out of the den and soon found Stoneblaze in the warriors den. He looked up "Oh Dreamcloud, how are you." he said, clearly troubled... not after what I have to say, I thought. "Stoneblaze... I am having kits." a purr rose from his throat and he rubbed muzzles with me. "THAT’S GREAT!"
Dreamcloud’s Story (part two)
Dreamcloud yawned and woke up with a shock, I was in the nursery. Why am I here? Then I remembered the kits wailing and screaming as the dog broke into the nursery shielding the newborns, as week as I was. I fought it of with my life, saving my new precious kits. Then I collapsed and fell asleep; here I am now I thought. Willowkit squealed and I pulled her closer with my tail to suckle. Then Stoneblaze trotted in “How are you and the kits?” “Oh fine thanks, Stoneblaze” “Oh, Dreamcloud you are bleeding, your shoulder!” He replied with shock “Yes I had to fight a dog to save the kits.” He stared in shock then stammered “I-I- I’ll get Dovewing” He ran out and came back soon with my old, friend Dovewing” I fell into yet another sleep as I felt the rhythmic lapping of Dovewing’s tongue.
Dreamcloud’s Story (part three)
Dreamcloud drifted to sleep. “She will be ok” I asked Dovewing “Oh, stop worrying about the scratches, Stoneblaze, she will be fine.” “Can I help” I was desperate to get my mate and her kits better. “Yes get some cobwebs and some, coltsfoot and some poppy seeds… oh and get two poppy seeds for yourself you need to get some rest.” I raced over to the medicine cat’s den and fetched the herbs and brought them to Dovewing “Thank you, Stoneblaze.” I took two poppy seeds and trotted over to the warrior’s den. As I went Dovewing called over her shoulder “She will be ok, I promise.” I looked back and said, “Thank you, and take care Dreamcloud.” I curled up in my den and soon let sleep take me.
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it was cool... but kinda confusing with the characters like goldenstar said... and no offense... but there is no way that she would have fought off a dog without anyone else noticing... and if she had fought all by herself the chances that she would have lived are like miniscule...!