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I hope everyone likes my fanfic. It will take me a while to get each part but I hope you will read it. Smiler
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The cats, clans and territories info is on page four. The different chapters are basically on every page.

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Here's the prologue and first chapter:

Prologue: An icy wind shook the clearing making the trees rattle. Inside the medicine cave Raindrop shivered in the cold as the SunClan medicine cat nudged a small heap of herbs towards her and her newly born kit. As she lapped up the bitter herbs she heard a sharp mewl. Beside her the medicine cat Squirrelpelt stared deep into her tiny kits eyes. Moonkits tiny eyes were stretched wide open as she stared at the den. Squirrelpelt remained perfectly silent, lost in the kits eyes. Shocked Raindrop murmured “Are you alright” Suddenly Squirrelpelt hissed “A path will be chosen and the silver Moon will rise high and save the forest.”
Chapter One: “By naming apprentices we show that SunClan will survive and remain strong” Greenstar yowled from the top of the highrock.”Moonkit from now on you will be known as moonpaw. Stormtail you taught Flamepelt well and you will do the same for Moonpaw. You will be Moonpaw’s mentor.” Moonpaw's heart swelled with pride as she stepped forward and touched noses with Stormtail. “Hi” she whispered, barely able to find her voice. As she looked at her clan they began cheering “Moonpaw! Moonpaw!” Moonpaw looked down at Sprucefur, the deputy and her father and saw him cheering alongside her mother Raindrop. Next to the nursery she saw her old denmates Woodkit, Waterkit and Airkit, cheering her name and looking at her with envy. Looking at the medicine cat den she saw Squirrelpelt looking at her with his eyes narrowed and all her pride and happiness vanished. When he noticed she was looking at him he began cheering her name out along with the rest of the Clan.
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“Are we going in the forest” Moonpaw mewed excitedly to her mentor while finishing off the last bits of a tiny mouse. “Of course we are” Stormtail said. “Today I thought I’d show you the territory and then teach you some hunting techniques.” “Oh good” Moonpaw mewed. “I thought I might have to collect bedding for the elders.” “You will have to do that eventually” Stormtail mewed sternly. “You know, there’s no shame in helping your elders” “Yeah I know” she mumbled. As they stepped out of the clearing and into the forest she became exited again. “Lets check the borders” Stormtail said “We’ll take a look at the StoneClan border. They might have tried crossing the lake again to steal prey.” The two cats stepped out of the gloomy forest and into the sunshine again as they headed for the edge of the island. Moonpaw gazed out at the lake and gasped with surprise when she saw how big it was. “Wow” she cried “It’s even bigger than I thought.” All of a sudden Stormtail bolted towards the lakes edge. “What’s that awful scent” Moonpaw meowed. “StoneClan has been on our side of the border again. We must report to Greenstar immediately.” As Stormtail and Moonpaw raced back to camp Moonpaws mind whirled with thoughts of a battle. When they arrived there was already a meeting. “Greenstar, Greenstar” Stormtail called. “Can it wait “ the leader meowed “MoorClan scent has been found on our other border!”

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Please tell me if you liked it.

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Wow. Is it really that bad? Frowner


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Can you read my fan fic here's the link http://forums.warriorcats.com/...093/m/2231048282/p/1


I'm leaving forums forever after my writing contest I'm just done with my forums BYE!!!! Frowner Go KINGDOM KEEPERS!!!!!!!! Wink
 
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Wait I like your story it's pretty good!


I'm leaving forums forever after my writing contest I'm just done with my forums BYE!!!! Frowner Go KINGDOM KEEPERS!!!!!!!! Wink
 
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Thanks. i like your story too.

yours is way better than mine. Writing about cats just doesn't work out for me.

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Thanks and everyone likes your stories I'll try and get you more readers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I'm leaving forums forever after my writing contest I'm just done with my forums BYE!!!! Frowner Go KINGDOM KEEPERS!!!!!!!! Wink
 
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thanks Smiler


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okay..... maybe i should delete this


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okay I'm going to leave this story until some people start commenting on it.


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moreeeee


things in life are thrown at u for a reason that u can handle
but what if u cant handle them?

If you met me, u would think of me as quiet, but if u knew me, you would wish i was.
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You can call me Icy
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Wishflower of Starclan
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Stormfrost (medicain cat)
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I have the next part on my computer. If anyone wants to read it please comment. Smiler


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i want to read it plzz put it up now


things in life are thrown at u for a reason that u can handle
but what if u cant handle them?

If you met me, u would think of me as quiet, but if u knew me, you would wish i was.
~~~~IcEeYeS~~~~~~
You can call me Icy
My Friends
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Wishflower of Starclan
Dovefeather (medicain cat)
or now known as
Stormfrost (medicain cat)
Jaystrike
luv ya all
 
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okay here it is. sorry its so short.
Chapter Two: “Well, what is it” Greenstar demanded. “StoneClan scent has been found on our border” Stormtail announced. Gasps rose from all the cats of the clan. “It is just as I have feared for many moons” Greenstar announced with worry in his voice. “MoorClan and StoneClan have turned against us. We must prepare for a battle” Anxious muttering came from every cat in the clan. Everyone looked worried except for her denmate Eaglepaw. Moonpaw saw the excitement shining in his eyes. How could he be exited now?
“I want all the apprentices training and all the warriors we can spare hunting. We must keep up our strength” Greenstar was yowling orders from the highrock. Moonpaw saw Stormtail and raced over to him. “Will I be fighting” she meowed. “ No you will not be.” Stormtail replied. “You will get to help out though. I think Squirrelpelt could use a helper. Moonpaw tried not to let her disappointment show. Her first day as an apprentice and she had to help collect herbs. She padded over to Squirrelpelts den. “Hello Moonpaw” Squirrelpelt said . “Will you be helping me today” “Yes” Moonpaw mumbled. “You want to be in the battle, Moonpaw?” Squirrelpelt said. “Kind of” Moonpaw said. Squirrelpelt turned to her and hissed “ You are the Moon that will save the Clans.”
The moon lit up the SunClan camp as several warriors sat guarding the camp. Moonpaw sat up in her nest rustling the dry leaves that sat around her. Eaglepaw glanced up and muttered something to her and then lay down into his nest. Moonpaw crept out into the clearing and sat in front of her den grooming herself. All of a sudden she heard noises behind her. Pebbles rolled down from behind her. Moonpaw whirled around and sniffed the air. She had never smelled anything like it before. Then she saw more cats than she thought she’d ever see in her life racing into her camp. The cats guarding the camp saw them too and began yowling “Attack!”


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