Secretpaw shrieked as a large brown mass landed on him.

(Can Secretsoul mentor Fawnpaw?)

(i was thinking secretpath but secretsoul works to and fawnspirit wen fawnkit becomes fawnpaw secretpaw will stiill be an apprentice)

the large brown tom scratched at secretpaws belly. then the wate lifted off as firefang grabed the rogue and pulled him off secretpaw. “get off lightningclan territory” firefang hisses and watched as the rogue ran away. “thank u firefang” secretpaw meowed. “r u all right?” firefang asked. “yes” secretpaw telied and so they headed back to camp.

The two walked back into camp.
"My kit! What has happened to you?" Haremoss exclaimed.
"Mom... it's only a couple of scratches." Secretpaw retorted.
"You didn't answer my question, sweetheart."
"A Rogue."
"Great StarClan, you brave thing!" Haremoss exaggerated. Secretpaw muttered and went to the nursery to see Fawnkit.

"Secretpaw! What happened to you?" Fawnkit meowed anxiously.
"I attacked a huge rogue that was on my territory. I gave him some wounds he won't forget easily." Secretpaw licked his chest proudly.
"Oh Secretpaw! You're so brave!"

"Yes all is well." A large tabby cat walked over. He had a scar over one of his eyes and one ear had a large nick, "You might have survived this time, but your lucky you weren't torn up!"

Strommore walked over proudly, "Are you telling Secretpaw how wonderful he did today!"

"He was foolish." The tabby growled, "If I was there, that rouge would be in Starclan by now."

"I know, Clawtail." When the two warriors left, Firefang wandered to Secretpaw and Fawnkit.

"Fawnkit! A apprentice in two sun-rises! And Secretpaw will be there! You're lucky I was there to save his tail! Crazy rouge all most made fresh-kill out of him!"

(NEWS! Fawnkit's warrior name is FAWNHEART and SERCRETSOUL AND HER WILL BE MATES! I WILL SAY IF THEY HAVE KITS LATER!)

(did u know that secretkits father is rowanfur? i think i wrote about him on page 2 and who is stormmore?)

(how long is two sunrises? two days?)

secretpaw was excited about the fight but his mother had made him go see the medcine cat about his scratches. “ur first fight, and u barley have a scratch on u!” exclaimed sweetflare the med cat. “i didn't really fight” secretpaw murmured. after all his scratches had been looked over he went to go see fawnkit.

"Calm down,Fawnkit!"soothed Fawnkit's mother,Dovespirit.Fawnkit paced back and forth,full of excitement.She was going to be an apprentice with Secretpaw!

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Originally posted by wolfheart1012:
(did u know that secretkits father is rowanfur? i think i wrote about him on page 2 and who is stormmore?)

(STORMMORE IS SECRETPAW DAD! you said rowenfur was deputy!)

Clawtail walked to Fawnkit, "I want to tell you something. I'm your mentor."

Dovespirit smiled, "Well, you tell her now! Wait till the ceremony!"

(no i said gingerclaw is deputey?? read all the story)

fawnkit heard dawnstar call her name from the highledge. as she walked out she saw secretpaw in the front row. she tried to act calm but she kept shaking. she finally reached the highledge where dawnstar waited. “lightningclan is lucky to have yet another kit ready to be an apprenice!” dawhstar yowlled. “from this day on until u get ur warrior name u will be known as fawnpaw and clawtail will be ur mentor!”. fawnpaw walked over and touched noses with clawtail. “FAWNPAW,FAWNPAW!” the clan cheered loudly espeaccily secretpaw who came over and licked fawnpaws head.

Clawtail thought as Fawnpaw and Secretpaw played,
She is to wild and risky. If she found out about "Dovespirit's sudden death." I would be caught! I'll have to do it soon then. My pack of wolves are hungry.

Fawnpaw padded happily along side Secretpaw,leaping over logs and such.She had know idea of what her evil mentor was planning-killing her mother.

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Originally posted by Fawnspirit:
Fawnpaw padded happily along side Secretpaw,leaping over logs and such.She had know idea of what her evil mentor was planning-killing her mother.

(DUNDUNDUNNNNNNN!)

(ok so did u read wat i posted?? that gingerclaw is deputy and rowanur is his father?? if u don't want that i can change my post from last time)

Clawtail walked slowly behind secretpaw and fawnpaw. secretpaw has insisted on coming with fawnpaw. they look so happy together clawtail thought. but fawnpaw won't be to happy when I kill her mother he thought with an evil grin as he watched them jump over logs and run around.