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This is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Here's the awaited 4th Chapter for you, split into 2 parts! Here's Part 1 of Chapter 4
Enjoy! Big Grin I like making people happy!
CHAPTER 4

Lionblaze leaped up to Firestar's small cave that was his den. He called, waiting to be accepted inside, and after a few seconds of silence a "Come in" sounded. Lionblaze stepped inside his leader's den, immediately greeted with an anxious "What happened" from Firestar.

"A rouge cat attacked me from behind, giving me" Lionblaze paused, giving the cut a lick before continuing. "This. I managed to chase him across the border to Windclan."

Firestar looked troubled for a moment, but regained his dignified composure."Windclan need not be warned. If you fought him off, he probably wouldn't come near any clan's camp. In fact, I wouldn't be suppressed if he left the lake." Hearing his reassuring words would've calmed him-if that was what really happened, although he was grateful that Firestar did not act upon what he told him. "Go to Jayfeather and get a poultice for that" He continued. Then, jokingly, he said; "This must be a long day for you, Lionblaze." Lionblaze purred as he left the den. Firestar, you have absolutely no idea how right you are.

Jayfeather greeting him with even more concern, because Lionblaze told him the whole truth. "It seems like we have to prepare for this war faster than we thought" he sighed. Lionblaze rested his tail lightly on his distressed brother's shoulder. "Now for that poultice" he continued. The next few minuets went like that, talking to each other through the treatment. Briefly, the conversation strayed to Icecloud, but Lionblaze pointedly changed the subject. Why is it that I can't mate. I think I love her!

When Lionblaze returned to the den, only to find Icecloud waiting for him, concern in her beautiful blue eyes. "What happened?" she asked.

Without even realizing it, he told her the actual story, not the one he told Cloudtail and Firestar. Only after she said "this is very complicated" did he realize what he was doing. He sighed. I told her this much, I might as well tell her about the prophecy.

"Icecloud" he mewed, frantically searching his mind for what to say, so he what not sound like a sun-striken mouse-brain. "I need to tell you something important"

Knowing she would follow, Lionblaze padded past the camp guard into the forest. "There's a prophecy…" He suddenly began pouring everything out to her. About Firestar's dream, about his powers, about the coming war with the cats of the Dark Forest, just hoping that she would believe him. Telling her this was a costly gamble that he couldn't afford to lose, but in his heart he knew that she would be there for him, and he would be there for her, always. He finished his seemingly agonizingly long speech, looking up at her, searching for disbelieve, shock, or even fear in her eyes, but the look she gave him was neither one of those. She pressed her muzzle against his, purring. He purred back, letting himself float into the clouds.

"You trusted me." she said, still not removing her muzzle from his. "You trusted me with the biggest, most important secret the clans have probably ever known. I'll never forget that. And don't worry. I won't tell a soul!" Lionblaze was overflowing with happiness that he could only express by pulling himself closer to her and purring louder. He felt his heart melt with joy as they shared this moment, a moment that will never be forgotten.



I love this chapter! So much LionIce it's not even funny! I promise you that even if you're a LionXCinder or a LionXHeather fan you'll wind up rooting for this couple (at least in the fanfic) by the end of the entire chapter. Please post, reply, all that good stuff. So until next time, Sees Ya'!

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OMSC AWESOME!
 
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Why do only 3 people comment on my story?!


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"They" say that destiny is inevitable, but "they" also say that you can overcome anything if you try hard enough, so did "they" just get mentally juked?
 
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wow its awesome! keep on posting!!!
 
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Very good! more!! Except you keep spelling "hoping" wrong.
Your spelling: "Hopping"
Correct spelling" Hoping"
 
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That's a very good chapter about me!
 
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this is..good AWESOME!!!! Eeker
 
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Is ok if I post a link to my fanfic?


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You have lots of fans! 466 people LOOK at my fanfic, but only two of them really post. Frowner
 
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Ok, now I do. Here's the rest of Chapter 4:
Enjoy!

Lionblaze woke with the first sensations to reach him were Iceloud's sweet scent wreathing around him, and the feel of her soft fur on his. He looked around, realizing that Icecloud's tail was wrapped around his neck. He pulled into her, still asleep, although he thought he heard her make a faint purring sound, rubbing his pelt on her's, enjoying the moment before shaking the moss off his pelt and walking out of the warriors' den into the sunlight.

Firestar was outside too, standing with the sun turning his pelt aflame for a moment before padding down the rocks leading from his den to speak to Brambleclaw. Poppyfrost was stepping out of the nursery after her kits, scooping up one of them by the scruff. Berrynose, seeming to have spent the night with her, bolted out of the nursery and plunged after the other one with a laugh. They both padded back to the nursery, each with one of their kits in their jaws. Lionblaze felt excitement course through him. Will that be me and Icecloud someday?

He decided to take Dovepaw out for training today. He thought for a second on what they should work before making his mind. Battle moves . He padded into the apprentice's den and prodded Dovepaw, curled up with her sister, Ivypaw, awake.

“We’re going to train today” Lionblaze spoke, looking down at his apprentice as she shook herself awake and picked her way from Ivypaw, careful not to wake her.

“OK” she replied, sleepily, yet excited. “I’ll go grab a piece of fresh-kill and meet you at the training hollow.” Lionblaze nodded, and stepped out of the apprentice den, padding to the gorse tunnel.

As he was making his way to the camp exit, he hear exasperated mews and shocked cries from cats. He looked around, and saw his clanmates stare soundlessly at the high ledge of the Hollow. He followed their gaze and instantly joined them. On the ledge were 4 bodies that were unmistakably foxes. And there was a cat leading them to the camp.

At first he thought it was a cat from another clan-maybe Shadowclan. Then he thought it was Tigerstar, back from the Dark Forest-he did the same thing when he was alive, only with dogs. Then the shadows over the sinister cat lifted and it felt to Lionblaze as if all of the blood in his entire body spilled out of him, leaving him as an empty shell.


At the head of the group of foxes was Hollyleaf.

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Oh, great. Hollyleaf ruins everything. Big Grin
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